The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line graph shows the
number
of overseas Use synonyms
visitors
to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007 Use synonyms
years
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of overseas Use synonyms
visitors
to the lake and mountains showed similar rising trends, Use synonyms
whereas
the coastline saw a steady decline from 1987 to 1992. The lake and mountain Linking Words
visitors
have the biggest, Use synonyms
however
, the coast has the smallest.
There was a gradual fall in the Linking Words
number
of coast Use synonyms
visitors
between 1987 and 1992. But 1992 saw a sharp rise in the figure of coastal foreigners. The Use synonyms
number
of foreigners to the mountains rose gradually from 1987 to 2000 Use synonyms
years
. But there was no change in the Use synonyms
number
of foreigners to a mountain. 1987 saw a large rise in the Use synonyms
number
of 2002 Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the lake saw a sharp fall between 2002 and 2007 Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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