The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant

The line graph compares

yearly

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the yearly

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income for each of

three

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the three

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London's

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of London's

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bread stores between 2000 and 2010.

Overall

, during the time period, the earnings of those bakeries witnessed a variety of trends.

While

the other shops saw an upward trend, Lovely Loaves saw a downward trend.

Moreover

, despite its sales its sales were the highest at

first,

they were surpassed

byothers

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by others

in the

last

five years. Started at 80.000 income

at

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in

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2000, as the highest number, the number sales of Lovely Loaves had a small

flutuctuation

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fluctuation

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, before rocketing in 2006. Afterwards, it reached

the

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low of 40.000 in 2008 and continued to hover around

at

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apply

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that level

from

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for

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the remainder of that

periods

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. Maintained the same

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for the first five years at about 50.000, Robbie's bakery had a steady rise between 2005 and 2007, putting Robbie's shop at the top of those categories. After having a significant increase to just under 100.000, it began to have an annual steady rise in 2010,

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the gap between others. Regarding Bernie's Bun, the figure fluctuated before soaring to approximately 40.000 in 2003. It plateaued at

this

level for the following two years, jumped to 60.000 in 2008, and rose slightly for the remaining periods, leading

this

to be the second rank.