The line graph shows visitor number to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016.

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in the city of Parkvale between 1996 and 2016.

Overall

, the National Gallery was by far the most popular venue after 2000,

although

the Indigenous Art Centre

also

saw a rise in visitor numbers.

While

fewer

people

went to the aquarium and zoo over the two decades, museum attendance remained fairly stable. Turning to the data in more

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, in 1996, the aquarium was the main attraction, with over 500,000

people

coming through the doors. Slightly fewer went to the museum

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that year, and the zoo and National Gallery welcomed approximately 300,000

people

each.

Although

the Indigenous Art Center attracted barely 80 thousand

people

in 1996, It

then

enjoyed a huge rise in popularity over the next 10 years, peaking at almost 400,000 visitors in 2004 and reaching a similar figure in 2016. By that year,

also

, the National Gallery had seen an unparalleled increase in visitors to almost 1 million. Meanwhile, over the period shown, aquarium attendance plummeted by about 400,000, going from the most to the least visited venue. The zoo’s figure fell substantially as well, though less dramatically,

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the museum saw

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deviation from around 450,000 annual visitors.