The line graph shows visitor number to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016.
The line graph illustrates the number of individuals who visited 5
attraction
in the city of Parkvale between 1996 and 2016.
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attractions
Overall
, the National Gallery was by far the most popular venue after 2000, although
the Indigenous Art Centre also
saw a rise in visitor numbers. While
fewer people
went to the aquarium and zoo over the two decades, museum attendance remained fairly stable.
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, in 1996, the aquarium was the main attraction, with over 500,000 Fix the agreement mistake
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people
coming through the doors. Slightly fewer went to the museum in
that year, and the zoo and National Gallery welcomed approximately 300,000 Change preposition
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people
each. Although
the Indigenous Art Center attracted barely 80 thousand people
in 1996, It then
enjoyed a huge rise in popularity over the next 10 years, peaking at almost 400,000 visitors in 2004 and reaching a similar figure in 2016. By that year, also
, the National Gallery had seen an unparalleled increase in visitors to almost 1 million.
Meanwhile, over the period shown, aquarium attendance plummeted by about 400,000, going from the most to the least visited venue. The zoo’s figure fell substantially as well, though less dramatically, wile
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