the cHART BELOW SHOWS the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport City center from 2003 to 2012

the cHART BELOW SHOWS the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport City center from 2003 to 2012
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The line graph compares replacement criminality which happened in the various regions of New Port city
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between 2003 and 2012.
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, it can be seen that burglary experienced
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decrease,
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car shifting experienced different trends in the time period. And theft from the person remained unchanged.
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with burglaries, in 2003 there were about 4,000 and
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the
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dropped significantly to 2500 in 2006 but the price continued to fall and reached 1,200 in 2008 and
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from 2009 to 2012 the
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of robberies increased slightly and stayed stable at 1500. The
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of car thefts from 2003 to 2005 was approximately 2800.
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in 2006 it
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drop to 2000 and remained unchanged until 2008. After 2009 there was a gradual increase and in 2012 it returned to the initial level. Robberies around the people had a fluctuation range from 500 to 1000. In 2003 there were about 600 and the quantity gradually increased to 900 by 2005.
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from 2006 to 2010 the
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dropped to 500 and
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to 800 and in subsequent years the
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hovered around 700.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 3 times.
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