Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meet can cause health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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consuming too much

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in our daily

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can result in many

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risks, I am completely against the idea that all people should go on a vegetarian

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hand,

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of the most important ingredients of many of our dishes and is used in preparing lots of traditional food and fast food. Food which are made from

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are very delicious, yummy looking and appetizing.

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, it is very delicious, the negative impacts of eating too much

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should not be neglected.

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of the most important

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risks of eating too much

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is that excessive consumption of

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in our

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may cause many dangerous diseases

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as cardiovascular diseases, high blood pressure, gout and diabetes.

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, these diseases can lead to death.

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, I accept that everyone should adopt a healthy

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and consume healthy ingredients in their daily

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, I completely disagree that all people should go on a vegetarian

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. There are some

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for

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, our body needs different nutritious substances

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as vegetables, meat, chicken, egg, dairy products, beans and other eatable things in order to gain necessary proteins and vitamins and preserve its healthy condition.

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, if all people just adopt a vegetarian

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and do not consume other necessary nutritious substances, they will definitely suffer from the detrimental effects of not receiving essential proteins, vitamins and minerals on their physical

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conditions. In conclusion, I personally believe that in order to preserve the general

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of individuals, they should follow a healthy and balanced

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and incorporate all healthy ingredients in their daily

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

271 words

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