The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime
The line graph compares the changes that took place in New Port city
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between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
, between 2003 and 2012
car
theft
and robbery
got
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no change
at the end
of
this
chart. But burglary decreased
step
by
step
. In 2003 cases of
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burglary occurred about 3.500
times
. The highest
point
was in 2004
nearby
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nearly
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4000
times
.
Then
in
2008
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2008,
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it decreased significantly to around 1.300 instances. In 2012 it was nearly 2.000 events.
Car
theft
crime was near to 3000 in 2003. In 2006
this
point
showed
that
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2.000 and it was the lowest
point
in
car
theft
crime. But till 2012 it increased
step
by
step
to about 2.700
times
. So, in the case of
car
theft
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theft,
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there is almost no result. The third case is robbery. The starting
point
of
this
crime was in 2003
with
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about 600
times
. Until 2005 it increased moderately to near to 1000
times
. In fact, until 2011 it fluctuated between 500 and almost 1000
times
. As
the
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car
theft
case
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case,
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there is no result about solving them.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, theft, step, times, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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