The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime
The line graph compares the changes that took place in New Port city
center
between 2003 and 2012.
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centre
Overall
, between 2003 and 2012 car
theft
and robbery got
no change Verb problem
had
at the end
of this
chart. But burglary decreased step
by step
.
In 2003 cases of the
burglary occurred about 3.500 Correct article usage
apply
times
. The highest point
was in 2004 nearby
4000 Correct your spelling
nearly
times
.Then
in 2008
it decreased significantly to around 1.300 instances. In 2012 it was nearly 2.000 events.
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2008,
Car
theft
crime was near to 3000 in 2003. In 2006 this
point
showed that
2.000 and it was the lowest Correct word choice
apply
point
in car
theft
crime. But till 2012 it increased step
by step
to about 2.700 times
. So, in the case of car
theft
there is almost no result. The third case is robbery. The starting Add a comma
theft,
point
of this
crime was in 2003 with
about 600 Change preposition
apply
times
. Until 2005 it increased moderately to near to 1000 times
. In fact, until 2011 it fluctuated between 500 and almost 1000 times
. As the
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for the
car
theft
case
there is no result about solving them.Add a comma
case,
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