The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime
The line graph compares the changes that took place in New Port city
center
between 2003 and 2012.
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centre
Overall
, between 2003 and 2012 Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
theft
and robbery Use synonyms
got
no change Verb problem
had
at the end
of Linking Words
this
chart. But burglary decreased Linking Words
step
by Use synonyms
step
.
In 2003 cases of Use synonyms
the
burglary occurred about 3.500 Correct article usage
apply
times
. The highest Use synonyms
point
was in 2004 Use synonyms
nearby
4000 Correct your spelling
nearly
times
.Use synonyms
Then
in Linking Words
2008
it decreased significantly to around 1.300 instances. In 2012 it was nearly 2.000 events.
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2008,
Car
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theft
crime was near to 3000 in 2003. In 2006 Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
point
showed Use synonyms
that
2.000 and it was the lowest Correct word choice
apply
point
in Use synonyms
car
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theft
crime. But till 2012 it increased Use synonyms
step
by Use synonyms
step
to about 2.700 Use synonyms
times
. So, in the case of Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
theft
there is almost no result. The third case is robbery. The starting Add a comma
theft,
point
of Use synonyms
this
crime was in 2003 Linking Words
with
about 600 Change preposition
apply
times
. Until 2005 it increased moderately to near to 1000 Use synonyms
times
. In fact, until 2011 it fluctuated between 500 and almost 1000 Use synonyms
times
. As Use synonyms
the
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for the
car
Use synonyms
theft
Use synonyms
case
there is no result about solving them.Add a comma
case,
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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