The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

You should write at least 150 words.
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This
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line chart shows the movement
or
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of
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main fuels
production
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in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Basically,
production
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levels of
petroleum
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was
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were
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the highest among the others.
On the other hand
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, coal and natural gas
was fluctuating
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fluctuated
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during
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from
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1981 to 2000. It was started in 1981 when
petroleum
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became
top
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apply
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one of
main
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the main
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fuel
production
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in the UK, coal was in
the
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second place, and natural gas was the
slightest
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newest
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one. The rank of
production
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levels remained constant for two years later. In 1984,
while
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petroleum
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was reaching its peak, coal fell too far so
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natural gas took over its position.
This
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phenomenon had
occured
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occurred
only for a year. Coal
production
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gained its strength again
for
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about five years later. Meanwhile, the
production
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of
petroleum
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decreased at that time but
still
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was still
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on the first level. In 1991, there was rapid growth
of
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in
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natural
production
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and it suddenly became the
second largest
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second-largest
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fuel
production
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up until 2000. Contrary, coal decreased ever since. In conclusion,
production
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levels of primary fuels in the UK
were
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fluctuated with ups and
down
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downs
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through
the
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apply
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time.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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