All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that
cars
that burn fossil
fuel
should not be used and prohibited,
instead
, people should purchase electric
cars
. I believe that electric
cars
are more convenient and efficient than fossil
fuel
cars
. These vehicles that burn fossil fuels should be banned,
due to
their negative impact on the environment that leads to hazardous outcomes.
For example
, these
cars
produce a huge amount of carbon dioxide that detrimentally affects the environment in many ways.
For instance
, carbon dioxide increases global warming which is a very dangerous phenomenon to humans, animals, and everything on Earth. Another thing is it causes air pollution which can lead to various diseases,
in particular
, lung cancer.
In contrast
, electric
cars
are more environmentally friendly and convenient for many reasons.
First,
they work on electric energy that doesn't harm the environment as much as other kinds of
cars
, which decreases the risks of air pollution and other environmental issues.
Second,
you can charge them whenever you want at home without the need to drive to the gas station.
This
continues to my third point, gas,
this
type of vehicle doesn't require any gas which can save you a lot of money looking at how much the price of it is rising every day. In conclusion, electric
cars
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benefits outweigh the advantages of other
cars
in terms of comfort and health,
furthermore
, their disadvantages are few compared to fossil
fuel
vehicles.
Therefore
, they must replace fossil
fuel
cars
to improve the quality of our earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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