You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they work hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Write at least 250 words.

In today's era, some cultures make

children

believe that if they

work

hard they can achieve anything, and sometimes that doesn'

t

go well for a

lot

of

children

,

this

is because maybe they don'

t

have the same

opportunities

or only

work

hard in class hours, and they won'

t

put in the extra

work

or don'

t

have consistency.

Overall

,

this

essay will try to deconstruct that idea to make it efficient.

This

ideology is excellent if the

children

work

hard, even when they do not need to. Still, there are a

lot

of disadvantages because maybe life doesn'

t

have planned “success” for those

children

. They get an unfortunate surprise, speaking about the

children

of my society, who have great

opportunities

and advantages. If they

work

hard, they can land a good job and, in the future, maybe become entrepreneurs. But there are some cases when they may come from bad backgrounds, and even if they

work

extremely hard, they can get sucked into the world of crime, and drugs or even die in the process, There are a

lot

of studies saying that in poor communities, thirty

percent

Change the spelling

per cent

show examples

of young men and women don'

t

make the age of 25. I believe that working hard can get you to achieve whatever you can, but in some forms, it isn'

t

applied as it should be. There are a

lot

of famous stories of people who make it from nothing,

such

as Lionel Messi or even Tiger Woods, but like those two who were successful in their respective careers, there are millions that couldn'

t

make it or didn'

t

find the right chances and

opportunities

to support themselves.

This

is something a

lot

of people do not take into consideration, Some believe that if they

work

hard, they can get anything, but without luck,

opportunities

, and the intelligence to know what you want your life to look like, you will achieve nothing. I believe a

lot

in a phrase that says, “Words are only words until taken into action.” The actor Denzel says that goals are only dreams without action and if you do not take action, you will end up in disappointment and failure.

This

essay is based on the idea that working hard can get you to achieve whatever you want, but in some forms, it isn'

t

applied as it should be and if those cultures apply it in a way that has the tools,

opportunities

, and consistency, the idea becomes an ideology, and it can change lives, but if they only believe in the working hard part they may get

further

from where they were before, but they will not achieve as much as they would with all the other factors taken into consideration.