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You are going to an English Speaking country for some months. Write a letter to the rental agency. In your letter. 1. the type of house you want 2. facilities you require 3. for how long you need the accomodation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student at Tashkent State of Economy University and I am planning to take a three-month business course in Wales.
That is
 why I am writing to request you to provide me with accommodation for that period. By the way, I have heard about your rental agency on the Internet and you have got bungalows with a seaside view.
Therefore
, it would be great if I could get one of these houses. I would appreciate it if my flat were located between my university and the sea.
Moreover
, I would be happy if there were modern furniture
such
 as air-conditioning, a TV set, a fridge
as well as
 a good Internet connection. As I mentioned above, my intended course will
last
 about three months, so I need to rent a habitable place where I can stay for at least three months. I look forward to receiving your prompt reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Jim Brown
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph is clearly focused on a single idea for improved clarity. Your letter does this well, discussing your requirements, preferences, and duration clearly in separate paragraphs.
task achievement
For an even higher score, consider providing more detailed examples or explanations to further bolster your requests, which can enhance the task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of your letter is clear, with a smooth flow from introduction to conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal, matching the tone expected in this context.
task achievement
You have successfully achieved the task by stating the type of house you want, the facilities required, and the duration of stay.
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