The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for producton and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for producton and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of electric production and consumption of the world's top ten countries in the year 2014. The unit is shown in billion kWh.
Overall
,
it is clear that
both China and the USA produce and consume electricity the most compared to others
while
Korea is in the
last
place
of
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ranking.
To begin
with, China created electricity around 5398 in 2014 and they used it at 5322. It surpassed the United States
that
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4099 and 3866 respectively.
However
, Russia which was in third place had the
amount
of number four times less than the US and almost had the smallest gap between production and consumption, by only 19.
Additionally
, Brazil which was in the eighth position had the
amount
of electrical usage, at 530.7, more than Germany which represented 526.6,
on the contrary
, the
amount
of consumption in Germany overcame Brazil, France, Canada and India. Korea Republic came in tenth place with 485.1 in producing electricity and 449.5 in consuming
this
type of power.
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