The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
line charts show data recorded every two
decades from 1920 to 2019, regarding the percentages of families
in the same country who owned household electronics in three kinds and weekly time
spent on domestic work by each of those families
, which could be done by electrical appliances.
Overall
, the more families
that owned one or more pieces of domestic appliances, the less time
they spent on housework on average. The proportion of households using domestic appliances has seen an increase over the past 99 years, while
the typical weekly time
consumed on housework has seen a continual decrease conversely
.
The households' ownership rates of both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners surged in the 60 years since 1920, going up by roughly 100% and 60% respectively. These two
rates also
reached the top of 100% after 1980, maintaining stable afterwards. The rate of owning washing machines increased from 40% in 1920 to 60% in 1960, however
, followed by a decrease of approximately 10% over the next 20 years.
In contrast
, families
' time
that
housework costs per week Correct word choice
apply
see
a dramatical decline before 1960, and Wrong verb form
saw
then
reduced in a similar range, fluctuating around 5% every two
decades.Submitted by eirenetan22 on
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