The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, and the bar graph show the results of a survey into car use
The graphs illustrate the means of
transport
over
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in
four
countries
and the reason why people use cars for commuting.
Overall
, it is noticeable that car
is the most popular Correct article usage
the car
modes
of Fix the agreement mistake
mode
transport
in four
countries
. Especially, in Canada, car
is incomparably high. While
other means account the
lowest percentages in each Change preposition
for the
countries
. Change to a singular noun
country
While
,
Canadians mostly use Remove the comma
apply
car
since they go to Fix the agreement mistake
cars
works
and there is no alternative.
In detail, Wrong verb form
work
Car
is
accounted for 90% in Canada, followed by Belgium, Germany, and the Netherlands with 72%,68% and 47%, respectively. Bicycle is the second primary mode of Unnecessary verb
apply
transport
in Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
, Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
whereas
, its percentage in other countries
are taken up
about 2%. Walking and public Verb problem
is
transport
are not preferred in four
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the four
countries
. Meanwhile, other means of transport
just comprise of
about 2 % Change preposition
apply
over
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of
four
countries
.
On the other hand
, as for reasons for Canadians’ preference for car
Add an article
a car
the car
in
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as
means
of Correct article usage
a means
transport
, commuting and no alternative are taken
up 30% and 38%, respectively. Night shift and quicker are comprise Wrong verb form
take
of
about 10% of Change preposition
apply
reason
why people use cars. Add an article
the reason
While
,
Remove the comma
apply
Canadian
who drive cars for convenience record Replace the word
Canadians
less
significant figure at 23% each.Correct article usage
a less
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, four, countries, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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