Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solution
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We can't imagine any place without public shipment as it is convenient, cheap and accessible for everyone, though it got some trouble with it like the frequence
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In , conclusion I can say there are a number of issues with public transportation but they're no match to compare with the coverage and dawning provided to a vast number of passengers no other means comes in comparison.Submitted by soglomovsarvar on
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Linking
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Task Response
Address the task more directly by clearly stating the problems and solutions related to public transport in separate sections.
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Topic Relevance
You've identified a relevant topic and attempted to discuss both problems and solutions associated with public transport.
Conclusion
Your conclusion sums up the essay by affirming the importance of public transport despite its issues.
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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