The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the two maps provides the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, the significant differences between 1980 and 2015 in the town of Fosbury were the additional roundabout and the reduction of green spaces.
According to
the information shown on the two maps, there was an extra roundabout added in
the
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conjunction
of
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the roads.
Besides
, the fields were replaced by some warehouses. Except for the hotel, the gracer's shop, block of flats and terraced houses were all removed.
Instead
, there
were
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a new car park area and a supermarket on the original site of
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the terraced
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terraced
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house.
On the other hand
, the park was moved across its original site
due to
the new construction of new houses in 2015.
Additionally
, the old tennis courts were transformed
to
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a sports centre with a car park space. What should be particularly mentioned is that the terraced hotels did not get any changes during the 35 years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural layout
  • open spaces
  • housing areas
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • road networks
  • commercial areas
  • economic growth
  • green spaces
  • urban expansion
  • public amenities
  • community development
  • demolished
  • renovated
  • modernization process
  • transportation infrastructure
  • landscape modification
  • environmental conservation
  • preservation
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