The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the two maps provides the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, the significant differences between 1980 and 2015 in the town of Fosbury were the additional roundabout and the reduction of green spaces.
According to
the information shown on the two maps, there was an extra roundabout added in the
conjunction Correct article usage
apply
of
the roads.Change preposition
with
Besides
, the fields were replaced by some warehouses. Except for the hotel, the gracer's shop, block of flats and terraced houses were all removed.Instead
, there were
a new car park area and a supermarket on the original site of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Correct article usage
the terraced
terraced
house.Correct article usage
the terraced
On the other hand
, the park was moved across its original site due to
the new construction of new houses in 2015. Additionally
, the old tennis courts were transformed to
a sports centre with a car park space. What should be particularly mentioned is that the terraced hotels did not get any changes during the 35 years.Change preposition
into
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