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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002. Write at least 150 words.
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This
 table illustrates the expenses of the car companies
at
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 the United Kingdom in 2002. They were calculated at million dollars among four different companies
accross
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across
 the country. The first one is
the
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Renault, which is the most
renoved
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renowned
 car company in the world . The expenditure made by them for advertising
in
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on
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 TV and
Press
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the Press
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 is nearly three
quaters
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quarters
. The ratio
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 cinema and the
outdoor
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 is quite
less
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low
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. The expense for the radio was a small minority. The second one is the Rover, which
is know
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 as one of the posh car
brand
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 in the world.
This
 too
ahd
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had
 invested a lot in
pree
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price
 and
telivision
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television
and
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15%
for
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in
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 radio and 2% for
outdoor
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. But they did not invest any amount
on
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 cinemas.
Finally
, Vauxhall and Cetirizine
has
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 made a reasonable expense in all the fields but Cetirizine failed to make in cinemas like Rover.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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