The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs provide information about the percentage of households with electrical appliances and
number
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of hours of housework per week in a house over a 100-year period.
Overall
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it can be seen that the uses of electronics including washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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were increasing day by day.
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, daily homework decreased in a given time. Looking at the data sets in more detail, it is evident that the
using
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use
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of washing
machine
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machines
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was
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stood at 1%, which was the lowest in the figures. By 1980, it had
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to 100%, which was the highest point in the charts and
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remained
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constant in 2000 and 2019.
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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starts
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40
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% and 30% in 1920. In 1960 they were similar and it was about 70%. At
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2019 they were 75% and 100%. Turning to the remaining
informations
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information
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, it can
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that, home activities
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as cleaning clothes, preparing meals and cleaning were almost 50% in 1920. But in 1980, it declined to 20% and remained constant until 2019.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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