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the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
#show #floor #plan #library #years
The map compares the floor plan of a public
library
 over
twenty years
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a twenty-year
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 period.
It is clear that
 the
library
 plan had several fundamental
change
Change to a plural noun
changes
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contains
Verb problem
apply
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of eliminate
Change preposition
including eliminating
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 some parts and
adjoin
Wrong verb form
adjoining
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 new ones. Focusing on the first design illustrates that large tables
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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located at the
center
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centre
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 of the
library
removed
Add a missing verb
were removed
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 completely.
Also
, the Enquiry desk which was a
place
 for tickets and
books
 returns converted to
cafe
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the cafe
a cafe
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 after 20 years and the Reading
room
 where placed
at
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on
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 the left side of the Entrance became the Computer
room
 for members.
Moreover
, the Adult fiction
books
place
 transferred from
left
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the left
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 hand to the right hand of the
library
 and the Information desk with self-service machines added to
this
 part. In front of the
room
, the specific
place
 for CDs and
Videos
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Video
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 computer games
enlarged
Add a missing verb
was enlarged
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 and provided with two
sofa
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sofas
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 and
story telling
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storytelling
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 events. The
children*s
Correct your spelling
children's
books
 department where located in
Correct article usage
the font
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font
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front
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 of the
CDs
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CD's
CDs'
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place
changed
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and changed
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 to the Lecture
room
.
In addition
,the
non-Adult
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non-adult
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 fiction sector which was between the
Children*s
Correct your spelling
children's
 unit and the Enquiry desk deleted totally. It is noticeable,
the
Correct word choice
that the
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Children*s
Correct your spelling
children's
books
 part converted to
Children*s
Correct your spelling
children's
fictions
Fix the agreement mistake
fiction
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books
 and joined
to
Change preposition
apply
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the Story telling events
place
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, place, books, room, children*s with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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