The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the united kingdom in 2002.

The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the united kingdom in 2002.
The given table illustrates the information
of
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spending on advertising
of
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various
companies
in Britain in the year
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2002.
Overall
, TV was the most dominant advertisement medium in which
companies
spent the biggest proportion of money.
In contrast
, Cinema was reported as the least one in which stakeholders showed interest.
Also
, the advertisement budget for a Radio was fixed
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companies
. In the United Kingdom, TV topped the year in which
companies
invested a lot in 2002. Cetirizine contributed 70
million
dollars
, which was the highest rate of the year,
while
, Vauxhall spent 65
million
dollars
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the second highest rate from a company.
In contrast
, Radio remained stable throughout the duration with just 15
million
dollars
. In terms of press,
Renault
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contribution was around 45
million
dollars
while
Vauxhall accounted
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amount as compared to Renault.
While
a tiny fraction came from Cinema in which organizations contributed as much low amount as possible.
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