The line graph below shows changes in teh amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975-2000

The line graph below shows changes in teh amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975-2000
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The graph compares the quantity of three types of fast food that young
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consumed annually between 1975 and 2000. With the exception of Fish and Chips, all the statistics showed an increasing trend
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began as the top rank among all the categories, at precisely 100 served. Unfortunately, they had some fluctuation in the first decade before falling to around 40 in 2000.
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the lowest point in a period of 25 years. Both Hamburgers and Pizza started at roughly 10 times per year,
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rocketed to just above 100 and 80, respectively. It ranked the former as number one and the latter as number two.
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