You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the changes that have taken place in Liverton docks between currently and 1980.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are new facilities set in and the purpose of the three old warehouses have
changed. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Moreover
, cranes are uninstalled.
To begin
with, the top two buildings in the north have changed into an education centre and kid's playing area. The crane in the middle of those buildings was removed as well
as
Correct word choice
and
constructing
a new sailing club Verb problem
apply
instead
. Furthermore
, on the opposite side of the club, the old warehouse was replaced by apartments and a hotel and a parking were built beside it.
Additionally
, a new side river walk
sprung up alongside a river in front of the hotel, the apartments and the parking. It was not only a new bridge that was constructed Correct your spelling
riverwalk
at the end
of all facilities area but also
a flood barrier which is located to the east of the bridge. Ships were not allowed to use this
canal to transport anymore and a new ship museum was added on the river in front of the education centreSubmitted by nnatthinee on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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