The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON
The map illustrates a two-
site
anticipated plan for a Garlsdon's town supermarket.
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Overall
, the first Linking Words
site
of the proposed plan will cover a larger portion of the area with numerous facilities in it Use synonyms
whereas
, Linking Words
site
2 will only serve a relatively smaller population.
In terms of zone one; the countryside, Use synonyms
it is clear that
different infrastructure Linking Words
such
as roads, rail, housing and industry will be set up with housing occupying the Northern and Southern regions. Linking Words
Additionally
, main roads will run through the Linking Words
site
from NW to SW with just 12km and 25km distance to Hindon and Cransdon respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the same road will go all the way to the greater SE and SW, 16km North of Bransdon. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the railway will Linking Words
also
pass through the countryside to the North of Cransdon.
With regards to Linking Words
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two which is the town centre, it is proposed to serve the supermarket without any traffic zone in place. Use synonyms
However
, the trailway will still cross the city centre going all the way to SW from NW.Linking Words
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