Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Several individuals believe that
children
should start education as early as possible Use synonyms
however
others believe that they should go to Linking Words
school
when they are older. I shall discuss both sides in more detail in Use synonyms
this
essay before giving my statement.
On the one hand, some say that Linking Words
children
should start Use synonyms
school
at a very early Use synonyms
age
because many researches have proven that Use synonyms
children
's brains only develop during the early period from 0 to 3 years. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it is thought that the early three years of a child can decide her or his destiny. We can see that Linking Words
this
is a crucial stage Linking Words
to begin
educating Linking Words
children
but the education can be performed by their Use synonyms
parents
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
children
should be educated when they are very early Use synonyms
age
but It does not need to start Use synonyms
school
at a very early Use synonyms
age
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For example
, the smartness of Jews is explained because Jewish Linking Words
children
are taught to learn by heart thick bible books by their Use synonyms
parents
when they were very early Use synonyms
age
even before they can read.
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On the other hand
, some people think that Linking Words
children
should not attend classes until they are older because science has demonstrated that Use synonyms
children
who have enough time with their Use synonyms
parents
will feel more confident in a new environment Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
school
. To be exact, the Use synonyms
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school age
age
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children
in each nation is different and depends on distinct situations. Use synonyms
For instance
, in my country, Linking Words
children
start at Use synonyms
school
from 3 to 6 years old Use synonyms
while
in Finland, the Linking Words
children
begin at Use synonyms
school
from 6 months.
In conclusion, I believe that Use synonyms
children
should not start Use synonyms
school
at a very early Use synonyms
age
and go to Use synonyms
school
until they are older because Use synonyms
this
stage they should spend time with their Linking Words
parents
to strengthen their confidence and receive an education from their Use synonyms
parents
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