The diagram below describe the structure of a home smokery and how it works.

The diagram below describe the structure of a home smokery and how it works.
The given diagram shows the process cycle of a home smokery in various stages.
Overall
, it consists of four steps, starting from taking fresh air into the
box
,
then
burn
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burning
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the fire which heat starts to prepare the food.
Initially
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in the first step, there are three boxes
which
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apply
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used for the preparation of food. The first
box
which
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with
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lid
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the lid
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were open to
taking
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take
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the fresh air into it. After that, the air entered
into
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the first compartment and
then
going
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went
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into the other
box
where logs were placed in a way to produce heat when
fire
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a fire
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starts
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to work. In the following steps, the temperature of the heat will pass through the narrow pipe and
reaching
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reach
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into the third
box
which is located on the ground floor. From where
,
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the steam of the fire gets into the work and
start
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cooking food which
were
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hanging on top of the
box
.
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