the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The graph
illustrate
the information about the number of waste supplied by three companies between 2000 and 2015.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that companies A and B experienced a downward trend. In the meantime, there was an upward trend in Change the verb form
illustrates
the
company C throughout the period.
The graph data clearly shows that in 2005 company A was the highest among these three producers. During 2000-2015 it experienced a slight fall to approximately 8 Correct article usage
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tonnes
. Moreover
, firm B witnessed a gradual increase between 2000 and 2005. However
, it dramatically declined from about 10 tonnes
to 7 during the period from 2005-2010. Then
there was a decrease of almost 4 tonnes
in 2015. Therefore
, company B was the lowest in
the end of the time.
Change the preposition
at
On the other hand
, producer C was the lowest at the beginning of the process. It climbed to 6 tonnes
from about 4 tonnes
. Then
it rose gradually between 2005-2010. Finally
, it saw a
rapid growth in 2015 and it was the highest in 2015.Correct article usage
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