The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The process of generating
electricity
from coal involves several steps. First,
coal is mined from the ground and transported to a power
plant. At the power
plant, the coal is burned in a furnace to produce heat. The heat generated from burning the coal is used to boil water, which produces steam. The steam then
drives a turbine, which generates electricity
. Finally
, the electricity
is sent to transformers to increase the voltage, and then
it is transmitted over power
lines to homes and businesses. This
process is known as a thermal power
plant, and it is one of the most common ways that electricity
is generated around the world.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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