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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choises. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choises
However
, some group of thinkers believes that to select something they have a wide range of varieties available in the market whether it would relate to food, clothes, or any favourable things. I think in the same manner and agree with the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all arguments
people
 may always need options.
This
 is because, if humans have some good quality choices to select with it would be easier for them to find suitable and effective products.
Furthermore
, choices make the community greedier to do more research on things.
This
 means that, before buying something
people
 always conduct research on products and make appropriate decisions.
For instance
, I personally loved to do research on market conditions, discounts, and surveys before buying my smart television. Because of
this
 survey, I was able to get a 35% discount on my purchase.
Moreover
, choices may help to find better educational courses to pursue .
This
 is because of, the wide variety of courses available to do post-graduation. To exemplify, my friend wants to do post-graduation in quality management, and he got the same course at different universities.
Hence
, it has become easier for him to select the best university among them.
However
, I would not overlook the other side too.
On the other hand
, selecting better from various options is a lengthy, tedious, and boring thing to deal with. To add
this
, usually,
people
 get confused
while
 selecting something because of the availability of multiple options.
For example
, Apple launched 4-5 types of different variants for one device with some minor changes.
Due to
 that,
people
 cannot select the best of that because it is a very boring thing to do. To wrap up, it can be said that despite of tired and tedious method of selecting something my reason is that a wide range of varieties is suitable for selecting something it gives confidence to purchase and might be useful to making important career decisions.
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introduction clarity
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines your stance on the topic, offering a preview of the reasons you will discuss.
cohesion linkage
Use a wider range of linking phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, enhancing coherence.
conclusion effectiveness
In the conclusion, briefly summarize your main points before restating your overall opinion to reinforce your argument.
balanced discussion
Consider both sides of the argument more evenly to enrich the discussion and show a comprehensive understanding of the topic.
use of examples
You provided clear examples to support your arguments, which helps to make your essay more persuasive.
organizational structure
Your essay structure is well-organized, with distinct paragraphs for each main idea, contributing to its overall clarity.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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