The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.

The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.
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The presented graphs reveal the information about citizens’ main reasons to (is it collocated?)
study
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, divided into two different categories, and the amount of support that employers give them (
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galah
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, we can see that the older people are, the less they
study
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due to
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a career reason and the less support they receive. As far as the reasons are concerned, a career reason used by people to
study
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witnesses a consistent decrease from 80% to about 19% among all
the
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ages. Meanwhile, a different pattern is shown for an
interest
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reason, with the
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increasing from 10% to 70%, which is a seven-fold growth. Only at the age of 40-49 do the reasons for
study
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have the same number at about 39 %. When it comes to the amount of support received by workers, the number for almost all ages declines from approximately 63% to around 32% except between the ages of 40-49 and above 49, rising from about 39 % to a high of 45 %.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words study with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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