The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia {Darwin (1), Sydney (2), Melbourne (3), Brisbane (4), Perth (5) and Canberra (6)} in October 2009 and October 2010
The graph shows the number of people taking part
4
sports namely : tennis, badminton basketball and Change preposition
in 4
rugby
in a particular region. From 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, rugby
players
decreased strongly. Rugby
players
showed the highest level and tennis players
showed the highest level in 2005.
According to
the chart, in 1985 the number of rugby
players
peaked, before falling sharply during this
period until 2005. In 1985, tennis showed 150 and it did not lose its rank and slowly increased, it reached 230 until
2005. Basketball and badminton rose and fell in almost the same way at the beginning and end of the period. In 1985, badminton showed 50 and basketball showed 70, they showed the same indicator until 2005.Change preposition
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