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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts show the
population
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 of
people
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 living in Yemen and Italy based on their
ages
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 in 2000, including its projection for 2050.
Overall
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,
people
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 under 60 made up more than half of the
population
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 during the period,
while
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 significant changes are projected to occur in the number of elderly
people
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 in Italy. Looking first at Yemenis in 2000, more than half of them were
people
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 under 14 followed by a group of
people
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 from 15 to 59
years
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 accounted for 46.3% and the elderly
people
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 (more than 60
years
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) were the fewest
population
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 (3.6%). Meanwhile, in Italy in the same year,
people
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 between the
ages
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 of 15 and 59
years
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 made up most of the
population
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 accounting for almost two-thirds (61.6%), almost a quarter of them were
people
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 above 60 and
people
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 under 14 made up only 14.3% of the total share. Turning to the projections in 2050, in Yemen, the
population
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 of
people
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 under 14 is expected to decrease to 37%,
while
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people
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ages
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 15-59
years
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 are predicted to make the most of the
population
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. The elderly
people
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 in Yemen are forecast to increase by 2.1% to 5.7%. Moving to Italy's projections, the number of
people
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 above 60 almost doubled,
while
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 the
population
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 of
people
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 under 14 experienced a slight decrease to 11.5%. Interestingly,
people
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 with productive
ages
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 are projected to see a decrease to 46.2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, people, ages, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population demographics
  • projected
  • projections
  • notable changes
  • demographic changes
  • implications
  • birth rates
  • life expectancy
  • senior citizens
  • young population
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • aging population
  • socio-economic impact
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