The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The two pie charts compare a country's proportion of
energy
produced by various sources in 1985 and 2003.
In 1985, energy
produced dominantly from oil at 52%. Other energy
sources in total contributed less than half, with nuclear and natural gas being utilized over one-tenth at 22% and 13% respectively. The rest were insignificantly producing energy
with coal at 8%, hydrogen at 4% and other renewable as the lowest at 1%.
In contrast
, the proportion of energy
generated in 2003 apparently had changed drastically, with energy
from oil declining to the level of 39%. Nuclear energy
generators also
experienced a decrease in energy
produced by 5%. On the other hand
, natural gas recorded an apparent increase in producing energy
with 10% more compared to 1985. Furthermore
, the data indicate no promising energy
transition to other renewable sources, with a slight addition, reaching just 4% after 18 years. Last
but not least, hydrogen was steadily used with the same portion, while
the use of coal grew quite high by 5%.Submitted by stood87 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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