The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar graph Compares residents of five cities in Australia
according to
their tea and
Coffee
drinking habits over a 4-week period.
Overall
, the percentage of residents who visited cafes and bought instant
coffee
was the most prevalent.
However
, fresh
coffee
purchases were the least. In terms of cafe visits, more than 60% of residents visited cafes in Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney. The figure for Brisbane was just over 55 %,
whereas
50% of people in Adelaide went to a cafe and purchased instant
coffee
. The percentage of people who consumed instant
coffee
was highest in Hobart (54%) and Brisbane (48%), followed by Melbourne (48%) and Sydney (46%). Turning to fresh
coffee
purchases, more than 40% of customers bought fresh
coffee
in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne. (43%),Hobart was the next highest at 38%,
while
the proportion of customers who consumed fresh
coffee
was almost
around
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34% in Brisbane and Adelaide.
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