The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar graph Compares residents of five cities in Australia

according to

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their tea and

Coffee

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drinking habits over a 4-week period.

Overall

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, the percentage of residents who visited cafes and bought instant

coffee

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was the most prevalent.

However

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, fresh

coffee

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purchases were the least. In terms of cafe visits, more than 60% of residents visited cafes in Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney. The figure for Brisbane was just over 55 %,

whereas

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50% of people in Adelaide went to a cafe and purchased instant

coffee

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. The percentage of people who consumed instant

coffee

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was highest in Hobart (54%) and Brisbane (48%), followed by Melbourne (48%) and Sydney (46%). Turning to fresh

coffee

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purchases, more than 40% of customers bought fresh

coffee

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in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne. (43%),Hobart was the next highest at 38%,

while

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the proportion of customers who consumed fresh

coffee

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was almost

around

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apply

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34% in Brisbane and Adelaide.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

You are taking a course at a local collage. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your lecturer. introduce yourself explain why you have not handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

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