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The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
These two pie charts depict how much
energy
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 was produced from distinctive
sources
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 in a nation between 1985 and 2003.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the use of hydrogen as a source has stayed the same in the two periods given. Other
sources
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 were used more in 2003,
while
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 the use of
oil
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 to create
energy
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 decreased dramatically in 2003.
First,
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the
energy
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 which was created from
oil
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 in 1985 was 52%; it was
also
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 the most popular source of
energy
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 in that year. In 2003, the usage of
oil
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 plummeted substantially, and the proportion was 39%. It needs to be said that, after decreasing,
oil
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 was still the most usable source of
energy
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 in 2003.
Second,
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other
sources
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 like natural gas, coal, nuclear, and other renewable
sources
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 rocketed considerably in 2003, and their percentages are 23, 13, 17, and 4, respectively.
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, in 1985, the proportion of
energy
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 produced from hydrogen was 4% and stayed unchanged in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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