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Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level o f academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#everybody #admission #university #study #programs #level #f #ability
Each person ought to study in a
university
 despite
the
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their
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 academic skills. In my opinion, each person should have the chance to study
in
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at
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 the
universities
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university
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. First of all, the place
on
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in
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 the
university
 can be free and without
exams
, and that will prove the capacity of the
students
.
Consequently
, that will affect the
decides
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decisions
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 of
students
,
decides
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decide
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 to continue
the
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their
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 education or go to
working
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work
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 somewhere.
For instance
, most
students
 will keep
the
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their
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 education if
exams
cancel
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are cancelled
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.
Furthermore
,there is a chance for a successful life,
this
 is
bettet
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better
 than just
leave
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leaving
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 the
university
 and
work
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working
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 in a not satisfying workplace.
Secondly
, free place in the universities without
exams
brings
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bring
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 a larger interest to subjects for
students
.
Therefore
, the academic skills will be rated more properly and will be appropriate with real knowledge of
students
.
In addition
, the
students
 can improve the subject which they know not greatly.
Further
, the tutor will test them and rate the academic skills of
students
. In conclusion,
the
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apply
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canceling
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cancelling
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exams
 in the universities will affect the
students
 in a useful form. From my understanding, going to the
university
 can be promoted by
institute
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the institute
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. it's clear
that is
 the best option for most
students
.
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Understanding of Topic
You've provided a considerate view on the topic, showing an understanding of the importance of education for everyone.
Argument Construction
Some arguments are well-thought, particularly the point about free access to university possibly increasing interest in academic pursuits.

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