The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart reveals what had been done by
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university anthropology graduates right after finishing their course.
Additionally
, salaries of
anthropologist
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anthropologists
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with five years of working experience are
also
presented.
Overall
, most anthropologist bachelors coming from the campus end up having a work, leaving only 15% unemployed,
although
8% were still unknown for their job status. As complementary information, the table shows after 5 years of career, the salary of 80% of anthropologists as freelance consultants or government sector
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75,000 dollars at minimum, and private companies employment in majority achieved lower salaries ranging from 50,000 to 74,999 dollars. In detail, even though 52% of anthropology graduates successfully settled with full-time work, 15% were only able to get part-time work,
while
8% decided to continue their studies as post-graduate students.
Moreover
, it is obvious from the data presented in the table that anthropologists with the lowest income come from private companies employment,
although
they have already worked for a
half decade
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