The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

The graph illustrates the percentage of population in the world and 6 different continents in the years

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1950 and 2007,

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projections for 2030.

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, it is evident that the number of people in all mentioned places will grow.

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, North America had a superiority over others and it will

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. The figures for Africa and Asia were responsible for the least amount in the populations, with 15% and 17%, respectively, which was followed by a noticeable increase to almost 40% in 2007. The proportion of

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population in the world in 2007 was 1/2 as high as 1950. Europe and

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pattern, all

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around 70% in 2007. As regards 2030, it is expected that there will be a steady growth in the global urban population to 60%,

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the continents of Africa and Asia will witness a rise to 51% and 54%, respectively. It can be seen that Europe and

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will be dominant in

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of urbanization with around 80%.