The graph below shows the information about how much people in the United States of America and United Kingdom pay on petrol.

The graph below shows the information about how much people in the United States of America and United Kingdom pay on petrol.
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The line graph compares the percentage of income the residents in the United States of America and the United Kingdom pay for petrol. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
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Americans spend more money on petroleum than British people. What stands out is that the space between the demand for
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cars of the poorest and the richest in the UK is higher than in the USA.
To begin
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with, only 0,5% of income is spent on gas in Britain.
This
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figure experiences a significant rise for higher-salary individuals and reaches a peak at approximately 4% before declining slightly for the richest people.
On the other hand
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, the poor in America have more need to use cars with 4.9% of salary and peaks at 5.2%, making the gap between low-income people in the two countries larger.
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in Britain, the more income individuals get, the more considerably
this
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figure declines and goes down to 2.5%
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