Some people think children should be taught competative in order to succed in life while others believe coorperative and teamwork are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many

people

think kids must

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competition

in order to

succed

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succeed

in life

also

this

completion extremely important for many children.

However

, I think that a sense of

cooperation

is more important than

competition

as it helps a child become a better person in the future. I believe

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various benefits

with

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others and

also

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this

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good idea. Nowadays, many young

people

be

competative

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competitive

for

study

and

also

children compete very important in order to

successful

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be successful

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in life.

Besides

that, they always

study

and

development

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also

many countries should be

competition

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. I think

competition

does not choose age. In my opinion, it is satisfying to work and

study

with others.

For example

, my coursemates always

competitor

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competed

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with one another

especially

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, especially

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my friend

shahrizoda

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. I think she is extremely

competitor

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competitive

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various

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in various

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subject

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subjects

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. I believe

to

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that

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kids give

competition

different benefits and

also

I always

want

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want to

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be

competitor

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a competitor

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.

Furthermore

, many

people

believe

cooperative

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cooperation

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and

teamwork

are more important because

teamwork

give

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gives

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believe

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belief

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and motivation to some young humans and

also

they opine that

cooperation

is more powerful than

competition

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the competition

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for an individual to become

successful

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a successful

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person in the near future.

Moreover

, if many

people

at

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study

and work with others they share

experience

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experiences

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or

idea

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with colleagues. I think

cooperation

extremely

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is extremely

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good for many humans.

For instance

, I always

study

at

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apply

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teamwork

because

this

method

very

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is very

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suberp

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superb

for me and

also

my uncle

learn

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to learn

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and work at

cooperation

. In conclusion,

this

method

extremely

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is extremely

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good for me and

also

competition

and

teamwork

give benefits for many humans. I use competitive and

coorperative

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cooperative

.