the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

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different processes of producing black

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.

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, the

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processes comprise a number of steps, beginning with the same procedure of collecting

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leaves,

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splitting up into 2 ways of manufacturing, and ending with frying leaves of both. At the beginning of the process, people directly pick up

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leaves from trees which is to require a good quality for the product, after which those leaves are put on a rack, and

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using a fan to remove 60% of moisture.

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the process is separated into

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different methods, the first one is traditional (loose

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), and the other is modern (

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bags).

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whose leaves are

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rolled flat and broken releases enzymes,

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the

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bags are cut, torn, and curled which is a quick process. After

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methods are done, it continues to the same procedures

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. Both of them will be Oxidated by rolling those previous ones spread on tiles, after a

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, because of the combination of enzymes and air that makes leaves change to copper colour.

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, those products of the former step are dried which 97% of moisture flies away, and

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those will have flavour and aroma released.