the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

the picture illustrates the

two

different processes of producing black

tea

.

Overall

, the

two

processes comprise a number of steps, beginning with the same procedure of collecting

tea

leaves,

then

splitting up into 2 ways of manufacturing, and ending with frying leaves of both. At the beginning of the process, people directly pick up

tea

leaves from trees which is to require a good quality for the product, after which those leaves are put on a rack, and

then

using a fan to remove 60% of moisture.

Next,

the process is separated into

two

different methods, the first one is traditional (loose

tea

), and the other is modern (

tea

bags).

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loose

tea

whose leaves are

being

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rolled flat and broken releases enzymes,

while

the

tea

bags are cut, torn, and curled which is a quick process. After

two

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the two

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methods are done, it continues to the same procedures

at the end

. Both of them will be Oxidated by rolling those previous ones spread on tiles, after a

while

, because of the combination of enzymes and air that makes leaves change to copper colour.

Finally

, those products of the former step are dried which 97% of moisture flies away, and

then

those will have flavour and aroma released.