The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
Contained in the illustration is information pertaining to mobile phone
sales
by five technology organizations between 2006 and 2012. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that Samsung and Apple witnessed upward trends
while
Nokia
, Ericsson and Motorola experienced downward trends.
Additionally
,
Nokia
dominated the market for the majority of
time
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. Looking at the chart in
further
detail, Samsung stood at 117
million
sales
in 2006 before increasing rapidly to 320
million
in 2011. In 2012, Samsung knocked down the
Nokia
monopoly with 396.5
million
sales
.
Similarly
, Apple began in 2007 with only 2.3
million
sales
which was the lowest
sales
of all but climbed continuously to 135.8
million
unit
sales
in 2012. Turning to the remaining companies,
Nokia
sold the most mobile phones of all with 345 units in 2006 and saw a fluctuation
between
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in the next 4 years.
However
, it managed to get the
sales
to 422
million
but dropped by almost 100
million
sales
in 2012. The same pattern can be observed in Ericsson and Motorola, they started at 74
million
and 210
million
sales
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respectively. During the following 6 years, both manufacturers'
sales
decreased dramatically to the same point at 28
million
sales
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales volume
  • consistent increase/decrease
  • sales spike
  • remarkable drop
  • steady growth
  • fluctuation in sales
  • technological advancements
  • market competition
  • economic changes
  • sales performance
  • sales figures
  • overall trend
  • anomalies
  • external factors
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