The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the figures regarding local catches and imports of fresh
fish
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into Perth, one of the states of Australia for a decade from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
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, the table provides data in metric
tons
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for locally caught and imported
fish
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into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 to 2014. During the whole period, local catches increased from 2004 until 2008. After that, it decreased from 2009 to 2013 and
then
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rose again in 2014.
In addition
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to
this
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, mostly fresh
fish
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were imported from other countries in the years 2009, 2010 and 2012. Collectively, a large amount of
fish
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has been used in Perth from 2008 to 2010. On one hand, local fishery continued to rise for the first half-decade (2004 to 2008) from 2677.7 to 8136.2 metric
tons
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.
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its value reduced to 4739.9 metric
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from 2009 to 2013.
On the other hand
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, the value of imported
fish
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fluctuates over the time period. It reaches at peak in the years 2009, 2010 and 2012 with 1104.1, 1203.7 and 1227.3 metric
tons
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. In total, most of the
fish
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are consumed from 2008 to 2010.
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