the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

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producing black

tea

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.

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, the process has

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all

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9 stages, starting with harvesting the

tea

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leaves to frying the rolled leaves. 

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with, the

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leaves must be picked off, it is important that only bud and 2 top leaves

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be chosen for

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. Following that, the

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leaves are placed on a rack and withered by a fan to keep the moisture out after which the process splits

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two methods of production, traditional where leaves are rolled flat

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so that enzymes

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be released from them or the modern method where the leaves are cut into smaller

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granular

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pieces. 

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oxidation/fermentation where rolled leaves are left on cement so that they

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change their colour to copper

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the enzymes in the air. The

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step is that copper leaves are left in the ovens and fired, releasing flavour and aroma and keeping 97% of

moisture

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out.