The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.

The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.
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the first bar chart illustrates the growth of the population in England and Wales for three centuries beginning from 1700
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the second block delineates the details regarding births and deaths for the same period.
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units are given in millions for the first demonstrative table and childbirths and people's dying are shown per 1000. Looking from an
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perspective it is readily apparent that the number of people rose dramatically over the period when death and birth rates reduced following the peak in 1800 and the demographics show a similar trend for the set course when mortality was lower than delivery at any demonstrating period.
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, in terms of statistics, in 1700 it was around 10 million and arrived at the top of just under 40 million in 1900 before hitting a high of almost 50.000,000 in the next one hundred years. With regards to birth and death sums, they followed a more or less similar pattern.
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, both started at a low level in 1700 ( birth - just below 10 and deaths exactly above 5) plunged to a level of more than 20 per 1000 and above 15 per 1000 in 1800 before dropping to about 10 and above 5 respectively during 1900.
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, in 2000 both figures declined
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to reach the lowest level for thirty years, comprising nearly 10 births and exactly 5 deaths.
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