It is argued that
technology
development
reduced offenders and many of
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by progressed
technology
on the other hand
some people believe that
this
technology
raised culprits. Here I will discuss both
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views and I will give my opinion.
Nowadays, all things are been controlled by advanced
technology
and convicts have many problems
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every crime like theft because nowadays wherever equipped
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surveillance cameras
that have Verb problem
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installed on streets and avenues.
all people’s identifications have been written on computers
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all of which are connected
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.
therefore
, high
technology
can reduce crimes
for example
,
police
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informed on television that since
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advanced
technology
came
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the world
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fallen. It is fair to say
due to
this
technology
communities are
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and offenders are involved
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.
Police
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declared if had not invented
this
technology
, we would have many miscreants so,
technology
development
is a great option for every society.
Of course, in every
there are different crimes and
also
desperate ways for offenders who are professional like hackers. They usually can access
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varied identification because they are some guilts and their aims are theft and crime
for example
,
police
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that some hackers could hack a prestigious bank and
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many monies through
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.
Thus
,
such
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problems are common in some public. Some people believe that if we had not had
this
technology
, we would have not lost a lot of money. It can be a negative point of
technology
.
Nevertheless
, my opinion is very positive of
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technology
because
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it and
all Correct determiner usage
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the
worldCorrect word choice
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to
developmentReplace the word
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technology
also
we will improve in everything
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advanced
technology
.
In conclusion, I think
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of
development
technology
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outweigh
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its
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and we need
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this
blessing.