Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem. Others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world , majority of the animals

are

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disappeared. It is

debatable

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question , who is responsible for

alleviate

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this

problem

.

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whether,

general

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public and nations or human

being

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beings

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as a whole. I partly agree with

this

assertion and

this

essay will acknowledge the validity of

this

statement and elaborates on my reason. On the

one

hand , many animal species are vanished around the world . Rapid growth of population

as well as

urbanisation are the major causes

while

government

fail

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to take measures to prevent the forest is

one

of the

reason

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reasons

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.

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, cutting down trees which are

shelter

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for forest living things for

construction

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of houses with

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wood and occupying their space .

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result

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they are unable to go

any where

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rather

then

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die .More funds should

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for

zoo

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by the authorities.

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to that bushfires are

one

of the

reason

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for extinction because they are unable to migrate during fire.

On the other hand

, human beings

plan

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play

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an

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crucial role in conservative of the forest creatures. People should start adopting the animals to save them

instead

of hunting them .

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,

one

of the

celebrity

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in India hunt a deer and

killed

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with

the

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gun just for fun and in some African countries kill for their food .If

this

continues,the next generation

kids

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have to see what we are doing for

dinosaur

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dinosaurs

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.

To sum up

, it is

an

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responsible of human

being

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beings

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,

public

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the public

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as well as

nations to protect their lives . Measures can be taken

through controlling

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deforestation for construction .

Further more

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,

allocation

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huge

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of huge

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funds for the zoo parks .

However

, humans stop killing them for food and entertainment.