Nowadays, most countries can improve the standard of living through economic development, but so are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?
standard of living has been improved in
20th
century as there is vast economic development. it has benefits and drawbacks which Change the article
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economic growth leads to improved infrastructure, access to education and health services, higher employment rates and advancement in technology. Correct your spelling
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as
the income Capitalize word
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raised
as a country's economy Verb problem
rises
growth
and as a personal income, there has been huge betterment in Replace the word
grows
standard
of living and increased purchasing power of individuals and families. Add an article
the standard
a standard
for example
, people with good pay scale
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scales
sending
their Wrong verb form
send
childrens
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children
to
abroad Change preposition
apply
for
study and in those Change preposition
apply
countries
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countries,
childrens
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children
learning
new things and improve their living standards.
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learn
although
, there is
disadvantages as well which Change the verb form
are
includes
cultural erosion as globalization may lead to a loss of traditional values and way of life and Correct subject-verb agreement
include
sciocultural
homogenization. Correct your spelling
sociocultural
moreover
, rapid industrialization often leads to pollution, depletion of natural resources and biodiversity loss. there is less community cohesion and breakdown
of family structure as people move for jobs Correct article usage
a breakdown
due to
urbanization. however
, health
services improved with economic development, so do lifestyle diseases.
in conclusion, Correct word choice
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advancement. so we should consider it as a positive change.Submitted by kiranrattu.kr on
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