The pie chart below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island , according to a survey of Visitors . Summaries the information by selecting and re reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The two pie charts classify feedback from
Bowen
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Island
visitors, distinguished by its advantages and disadvantages aspects, with each chart sharing the same number of categories.
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Overall
, the high cost of living was perceived as the main downside, Linking Words
whereas
the people majorly agreed as the best feature of Linking Words
Bowen
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In contrast
, food quality was the least voted as the bad side, Linking Words
while
good accommodation was accepted as the good side of the Linking Words
island
.
Going to the details, a quarter of the respondents claimed that entertainment proved to be lousy and only 15% experienced the weather of Use synonyms
Bowen
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did not meet their preference.
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Moreover
, the scenery was the second thing most-liked at 35%, followed by the culture just a tad higher than the Linking Words
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place at 12%. Interestingly, despite the high cost of living on the Linking Words
island
, it did not make most visitors feel the place offered good accommodation. In summary, visiting Use synonyms
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made people enjoy its people and scenery, though mostly felt a high cost of living must be paid Use synonyms
as a consequence
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