The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides information about the production of industrial
bricks
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.
Overall
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, the entire process consists of several methods, beginning with the excavation of clay, continuing with various mixing procedures, and concluding with the distribution of the finished goods. An excavator is used to dig clays at the start of the operation, and
then
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a grid is used to separate the sand from the metal to produce pure sand. After that, the right amount of water is added to the pure sand to make sure the mixture is neither too liquid nor too thick. The mixture is
then
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formed into
bricks
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by either being moulded in a mould or being cut using a wire cutter. The next step involves arranging and drying the
bricks
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in a drying oven for one to two days. After that, they are moved to a large tank
that is
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split into three sections.
Bricks
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are cooled in a cooling chamber for two to three days following exposure to medium and high temperatures, respectively. Ultimately, vehicles are used to package and deliver the finished goods to stores.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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