The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking the visitors how satisfied they were with their visit , during the same two period.
The
given
table chart illustrates the total number of people visitingVerb problem
apply
to
the Ashdown Museum in the year Remove the preposition
apply
befor
and after refurbishment, Correct your spelling
before
while
the pie charts represents
the results of surveys of Change the verb form
represent
visitors
satisfaction between both the given periods.
Change the noun form
visitor
Overall
, there is an increase in visitors
after the refurbishment compared to earlier and a large amount of them are statisfied
which were dissatisfied before.
Correct your spelling
satisfied
Firstly
, it is clearly seen from the chart that the number of visitors
visiting the Ashdown Museum swelled drastically from 74,000 to 92,000 after development. Further
, year
before Add an article
the year
a year
refubishment
40% of individuals are dissatisfied which reduces to 15%. In Correct your spelling
refurbishment
the
similar way, there is Change the article
a
decrease
in very dissatisfied tourists by 5%.
Apart from these, the survey Add an article
a decrease
the decrease
show
that 15% and 30% Change the verb form
shows
visitors
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of visitors
are
very satisfied and satisfied before, Wrong verb form
were
however
Add a comma
however,
this
proportion rises up to 35% and 40% respectively. Lastly
, there are also
people who don't give any response to either four
Change preposition
of four
catagories
and Correct your spelling
categories
thir
percentage remained Correct your spelling
their
same
for both the giver periods Correct article usage
the same
as
5%.Change preposition
at
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