A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced the most' Write a letter to te editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I am one of the active readers of your magazine. Every single book I read constantly. The
last
book especially attracted me a lot. I had read the thesis "children's behaviour".
I am a mother; to be clear, I have to read and watch any topic of the kids' psychology. Such
that, I saw in this
thesis much helpful advice for parents. For example
, most kids inherently take after their parents from the moment they are born. I mean, this
study material affected me for studying together with
my children.
Your magazine should impact society positively even though the last
study material helps many parents for
communicate with their children. There are a lot of results of real experiments with useful examples. Change preposition
apply
In other words
, many people liked your magazine with fantastic study material.
I am eagerly waiting for your next book with a more interesting topic.
Sincerely, your valued reader, Mrs NSubmitted by nbogey777 on
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coherence cohesion
To improve logical structure, consider organizing your ideas more clearly. For example, you could start each paragraph with a topic sentence that clearly states the main point of that paragraph.
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Provide more specific examples of how the book influenced you personally. This will make your response stronger and more convincing.
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Your writing tone is very suitable for a letter to a magazine editor. It is polite and respectful.
coherence cohesion
You have a good greeting and closing, which gives a sense of completeness to your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite